So I guess I'm still not quite sure what to do about the background and the beard on this piece:
- My first concern about the piece is the background. I have a really nasty habit of ignoring it and just focusing on the subject matter in the front. I am trying to improve my composition as well in pieces. The image on top that I posted has a second figure I drew in that I am considering adding. I would add another figure as well for a total of three in the piece. It would add some diagonal lines and interesting negative shapes which may help the piece. However, I am not sure if these would be distracting. Adding them would also bring up the issue of color and whether it would be distracting to the central figure in the foreground.
- My second concern is the beard, hair, and glasses. I am still conflicted about whether to add color. Right now I feel like there is too much white space. It may add to the piece to have some of the subtle hair wisps. I would not be adding any new colors and I would be keeping with the same color scheme. The hair would be a light lavender color for areas of gray and white hair in the photograph. Traces of brown hair would have the same shades as the eyebrows (a dark forest green). I feel like if I colored the hair, I would need to also color the background. I was thinking of doing a large blend of colors. Overall, they would appear to be a dark brownish black (the same color as the eyes). It would neutralize the bright colors I have in the face.
- Another concern I have is about my use of color in the piece. My original intention with the piece was to use color to represent different shapes on the face and to exaggerate and abstract them. I then intended to darken areas with more neutral shades to show the shading and contours of the face. I think though that I have lost that a bit when the piece is viewed from more than two feet away. Color here is not supposed to replace shade. Do I need to amplify my darks a bit more? It could certainly add some roundness to the head and the nose. I am just confused about whether the function of color in the piece is clear.
- My last worry (for now at least...) is about the mood that is conveyed by the face. I kind of am looking for what the expression people think the portrait is giving off. Is it a grandfatherly look of warmth and concern? Is it a cynical look? Is it a condescending glance? I don't know whether what I intend to portray is actually being represented.
- Kudos to anyone who was actually able to get through reading all of this...that is exceedingly impressive.
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Isn't it great
When your piece seems to fail
Because you overworked it
And added too much detail?
Isn't it lovely
When inspiration hits
But by the end of ten minutes
You are rolling in fits?
And isn't it grand
When all the people nearby
Create pieces far better
No matter how hard you try?
Well what is the solution
To this gargantuan mess?
Do you throw down the paintbrushes
And instead take up chess?
Does one sit and worry
Until the night hours are wee?
Or should yous sit at this fork in the road
And go blogspotting just like me?
personally i love this piece. some people think that you need to do something with the hair but honestly i dont think there is a need to. there is so much going on in the face and you dont want to take away from how great that is by adding even more detail. one of my favorite things about this is how the piece all falls together because the beard and the hair are the background. i dont think you need to change anything about this, its great just how it is. nice job!
I don't think you should do anything to the hair D: I love it the way it is.
If you're concerned about it, you can add maybe a little bit of a color to it to add some shadow, but I like it the way it is. That color should be really really light.
Maybe for a background, do a simple color backdrop instead of objects and people. You could blend it into the beard a little with something simple like that and keep the way the beard mixes with things. =3
i love this piece. it was probably my favorite of all the summer stuff.
i dont think anything is needed. it looks finished to me. i love the way the hair is not defined and is the same white as the background. i think there is so much color and detail in the face, that the white is a nice balance.
why did you write so much? you are way too in love with blog world haha. i'm just going to disreguard all of your concerns, which i read, becuase i love all the colors you used, the background is a nice patchwork of neutralish colors and mr. old man is looking better than ever. one describing word for him is lucious? maybe?
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